Great to see new people here eager to learn and to show their work.
Unfortunately, what you have uploaded here is your Movie Maker file. If you haven't already, you first have to let Movie Maker produce a video file (there is a "save movie" button on the right.
Next, I fear you won't be able to upload such a big file here directly. You will first have to upload them, for example on youtube. If you set the file as "not listed" only those who follow your link here can see and find it there.
If you have uploaded it, you must copy the url and can than post the video link here with the video button above.
Hope that helped! Looking forward to seeing your work!
Post by Darth Telos on Jan 10, 2018 23:15:27 GMT -5
Thank you for posting that on Youtube and welcome to your training with the TPLA system. Please always take any criticisms as us trying to help you get better and better. With that said this isn't a bad start but it needs work. I'll list the things here I'd like for you to focus on.
1. Front and side views of each technique are helpful for use to better examine your progress so please try to shoot both in the future. 2. Your stance in the very beginning needs works. Your lead foot is pointed outward when it needs to be inward instead and your rear leg looks almost straight and stance too wide. Feet should be not much wider then the width of your shoulders. 3.As a result of problem #2 your hut slide is wobbly. Fix the stance and shoot for a very smooth Hut Slide. You goal is for your head to not wobble but instead glide forward and back. 4. You Ready Stance... again this is a stance issue as mentioned above but one last things is put the saber more behind you and less to the side of you. 5. Kneeling stance your upper body should be more forward. 6. Your blocks: High parry was too forward. Think of it like a flat roof instead. Your mid and low parries were too wide. The saber should black as if you are inside a tight fitting box. Your drop parry is too vertical. Angle it like a closed umbrella.
That is all I have for now. I look forward to seeing you progress.
Desalon Manshad: Happy Friday and May the Fourth be with you all!! I'll see if I can get some Shii Cho Formula primer reps in when I get the chance!
May 4, 2018 13:25:35 GMT -5
BRAWLER: Hope everyone had a great May the 4th!
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Desalon Manshad: Hey Everyone, little heads up, I might not be able to train for a little, recently got back from this overnight hospital trip from this episode my body had due to dehydration and overheating/overdressing, so my right arm and shoulder are pretty bruised atm
Jun 2, 2018 14:40:23 GMT -5
Desalon Manshad: But I'll be sure to train when I'm able to! Hope everyone is having a great day and May the Force be With You!
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Furiora Helseare: Wow, been a while huh? my costrocondritis got super bad so I was basically bed ridden for the last couple of months, but I think it's finally on the way out. Not going to be training for a while yet just to make sure I don't aggravate it.
Jun 2, 2018 20:01:20 GMT -5
Furiora Helseare: Looking forward to resuming my training though
Jun 2, 2018 20:01:30 GMT -5
Desalon Manshad: Hello! Lately my arm has been feeling better, so I should be good for doing some more primer training
Jul 22, 2018 21:18:29 GMT -5
BRAWLER: Hello all! Summer is here in full swing! I hope everyone is taking advantage of the beautiful weather and getting outside for their saber practice! Hope to see everyone post up online, what we've been working on.
Jul 24, 2018 10:12:05 GMT -5
DarthRevic: hello all
Jul 30, 2018 16:54:55 GMT -5
BRAWLER: Hello Darth Revic! How goes the training?
Jul 31, 2018 9:55:58 GMT -5
Furiora Helseare: Because I'm still struggling with the saber position due to my huge gut (that I will one day get rid of), is the saber required to be facking backwards during front stance?
Aug 2, 2018 14:01:39 GMT -5
BRAWLER: Keep at it Furi!! Slow and steady friend, progress will come! 😊
Aug 4, 2018 7:17:49 GMT -5
Mitchell Theron Patrick: Hello, I’m new to the idea of lightsaber dueling and I still need to get a lightsaber. I was wondering if TPLA still conducts classes as I live in Michigan.
Oct 18, 2018 3:43:47 GMT -5
Mitchell Theron Patrick: If anything comes up or you have tips/suggestions for me, please message me. Thank you!
Oct 18, 2018 3:46:59 GMT -5
Dark Angelus: Greetings to all. I am already in a class called River City Jedi. Learned so much already and they do use TPLA as part of their guide lines and forms.
Dec 12, 2018 10:28:19 GMT -5